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A flutter,
A pounding,
Tempered steal encasing my heart,
Broken? Beaten? Bleeding?

Melted ice,
Tattered shirt,
Time spent battling demons,
Catastrophic? Chaos? Clutter?

Salted wounds,
Inner scars,
Preparing to protect ones self,
Deflated? Downtrodden? Density?

Heated arrow,
Shattered defenses,
Nothing left to dream for,
Encroachment? Enchantment? Early?

Treat me,
With care,
Time may have passed away,
Forgive? Forget? Forever?
©2003-2009 ~booga
:iconbooga:

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once again i don't know what to say about this poem. um just some thoughts that popped into my head. about how i feel right now. yeah a bit wounded and confused....

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:iconthewanderingspaz:
Deep. Keep up the good work.

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~The Wandering Spaz
:iconhardkoreheaven:
WOW...so emotional...I like how you used a sequence of the alphabet at the end of each line...I think that is kewl...
`Heaven`

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Bow before me and rise to heaven with a head of knowledge of the world you left behind and expect what is yet to come.
*hardkoreheaven*
:iconpilot-duo:
Eeeyah that's really good! *hugs* Hope you feel better, ne? I just came outta slump myself -_-;;

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"Death is no dream, for in death I'm caressing you.
With the last breath of my soul I'll be blessing you."
:iconcomplex:
Wow you've actually improved a bit. I never thought you would.

But consider writing poetry on inspiration instead of emotion.

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#writers - [link]

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April 6, 2003

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